2014遼寧軍隊(duì)文職考試崗位能力:雙觀點(diǎn)思路在大作文的運(yùn)用
分析評(píng)論兩個(gè)或兩個(gè)以上看似矛盾的觀點(diǎn)時(shí),其解題思路如下: 認(rèn)識(shí)環(huán)節(jié):材料中提出的兩種思路/觀點(diǎn)/理念分別是A和B。 分析環(huán)節(jié):A的積極性表現(xiàn)在/在方面存在明顯的優(yōu)勢(shì),但是在則存在明顯的局限性/不足。B的積極性表現(xiàn)在/在方面存在明顯的優(yōu)勢(shì),但是在則存在明顯的局限性/不足。 解決環(huán)節(jié):因此,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)把A和B結(jié)合起來,在方面發(fā)揮A的優(yōu)勢(shì),在方面發(fā)揮B的優(yōu)勢(shì),使他們相輔相成,相互促進(jìn)。 認(rèn)識(shí)環(huán)節(jié)-分析環(huán)節(jié)-解決環(huán)節(jié),是高分作文的必然條件。適用這種思路的大作文題目中,會(huì)很明顯地出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)看似矛盾的觀點(diǎn),如以下類別的大作文題目:
解放軍文職招聘考試英文信函題型作文-解放軍文職人員招聘-軍隊(duì)文職考試-紅師教育
發(fā)布時(shí)間:2017-12-17 16:28:00英文信函題型作文寫作步驟要求考生根據(jù)提綱寫一封英文書信,如2005年12月六級(jí)作文、2005年1月四六級(jí)作文、2004年6月四六級(jí)作文、2004年1月四級(jí)作文。對(duì)這類題型,通常分為5個(gè)步驟來寫:第二段、寒暄語句,引出寫信的目的:寒暄句+主題句(注:寒暄句和主題句可以是同一個(gè)句子)第三段、根據(jù)提綱擴(kuò)展主體段落:主題句+擴(kuò)展句1+擴(kuò)展句2+擴(kuò)展句3第四段、表明自己的觀點(diǎn),并結(jié)束書信主體段落在最后要他談自己的看法第五段、寒暄句+落款第二部分、英文信函題型作文寫作范文練習(xí)[實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練]directions:for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic a letter to the university president about the canteen service campus. you should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline below:假如你是李明,請(qǐng)你就本學(xué)校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等,可以是表揚(yáng),也可以是批評(píng)建議,也可以都有。[寫作模板:架構(gòu)階段]第一段:稱呼dear mr. president,第二段:引出寫信的目的主題句: this letter comes to you from ____.擴(kuò)展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon第三段:對(duì)學(xué)校食堂正面的看法主題句:as you know, _____ . but unfortunately, ______.擴(kuò)展句:1、___. (舉例) as a result, _____.2、besides, ______.3、and what"s more, _____.第四段:對(duì)學(xué)校食堂負(fù)面的看法主題句:some people may argue that ____.擴(kuò)展句:1、for instance, ____ and ____.2、but in my opinon, ______.第五段:結(jié)尾,表明自己看法結(jié)尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with _____.擴(kuò)展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks. li ming[寫作模板:填充階段]第一段:稱呼dear mr. president,第二段:引出寫信的目的主題句: this letter comes to you from one of your students.擴(kuò)展句: in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon第三段:對(duì)學(xué)校食堂的看法主題句:as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don"t find the service there satisfying sometimes.擴(kuò)展句:1、the food is not as nutritious as it should be. (舉例) as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.2、besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.3、and what"s more, the fare is also a little higher at university.第四段:別人對(duì)食堂看法主題句:some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.擴(kuò)展句:1、for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.2、but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.第五段:結(jié)尾,表明自己看法結(jié)尾句:to be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,擴(kuò)展句:i do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there. thanks.第三部分、范文dear mr. president,this letter comes to you from one of your students.in it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.as you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. but unfortunately, we don"t find the service there satisfying sometimes.the food is not as nutritious as it should be. as a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.and what"s more, the fare is also a little higher at university.some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.for instance, ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.but in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.百變句子開頭使你的句型多變1.以同位語作為句子的開頭。The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party. 2.以單個(gè)修飾語作為句子的開頭。這個(gè)修飾語可以是形容詞、分詞或副詞。Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.Secretly, the girl entered the room.With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3.以短語修飾語作為句子的開頭。短語修飾語可以是介詞短語、不定式短語、分詞短語以及獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)。In front of me stood a beautiful girl.To pass the exam, the students worked hard.Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.Your homework finished, you may go home.4.用從句作為句子的開始。If I am free, I will attend your lecture.Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.
解放軍文職招聘考試英語四六級(jí)作文套句總結(jié)-解放軍文職人員招聘-軍隊(duì)文職考試-紅師教育
發(fā)布時(shí)間:2017-12-17 16:28:36英語四六級(jí)作文套句總結(jié)開頭Recently, the problem of has aroused people s concern.最近, 問題已引起人們的關(guān)注.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活中扮演著越來越重要的角色.它給我們帶來了許多好處,但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴(yán)重的問題.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.如今,(人口過剩)已成為我們不得不面對(duì)的問題了.It is commonly believed that / It is a common belief that人們一般認(rèn)為Many people insist that很多人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that 隨著科技的發(fā)展,越來越多的人認(rèn)為A lot of people seem to think that很多人似乎認(rèn)為結(jié)尾Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that把所有這些因素加以考慮,我們自然會(huì)得出結(jié)論Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that 考慮所有這些因素, 我們可能會(huì)得出合理的結(jié)論Hence/Therefore, we d better come to the conclusion that因此,我們最好得出這樣的結(jié)論There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn).All in all, we cannot live without But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.總之,我們沒有 是無法生活的.但同時(shí),我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來對(duì)付可能出現(xiàn)的新問題.引出不同觀點(diǎn):People s views on vary from person to person. Some hold that . However, others believe that .人們對(duì) 的觀點(diǎn)因人而異.有些人認(rèn)為 .. 然而其他人卻認(rèn)為...People may have different opinions on人們對(duì) 可能會(huì)有不同的見解.Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人們對(duì)待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異.There are different opinions among people as to關(guān)于 . 人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同.Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 對(duì)(失敗)人們的態(tài)度各不相同.提出建議:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).該是我們停止這一趨勢(shì)的時(shí)候了.It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of該是采納 的建議,并對(duì) 的進(jìn)展給予特殊重視的時(shí)候了.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of毫無疑問,對(duì) 問題應(yīng)予以足夠的重視.Obviously, . If we want to do something , it is essential that顯然,如果我們想做某事,很重要的是Only in this way can we 只有這樣,我們才能It must be realized that 我們必須意識(shí)到預(yù)示后果:Obviously, if we don t control the problem, the chances are that will lead us in danger. 很明顯,如果我們不能控制這一問題,很有可能我們會(huì)陷入危險(xiǎn).No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that毫無疑問,除非我們采取有效措施,很可能會(huì)It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.很緊迫的是,應(yīng)立即采取措施阻止這一事態(tài)的發(fā)展.論證From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看來,支持第一種觀點(diǎn)比支持第二種觀點(diǎn)更有道理.I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我無法完全同意這一觀點(diǎn) .Personally, I am standing on the side of 就個(gè)人而言, 我站在 的一邊.I sincerely believe that 我真誠地相信In my opinion, it is more advisable to do than to do .在我個(gè)人看來,做 比做 更明智.Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why給出原因:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, Second, Third,這一現(xiàn)象的存在是有許多原因的.首先, 第二, 第三,Why did ? For one thing For another . Perhaps the primary reason is為什么會(huì) ? 一個(gè)原因是 令一個(gè)原因是 或許其主要原因是 .I quite agree with the statement that the reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分贊同這一論述,即 ,其主要原因如下:列出解決辦法:Here are some suggestions for handling這是如何處理某事的一些建議.The best way to solve the troubles is解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是People have figured out many ways to solve this problem.人們已找出許多辦法來解決這個(gè)問題.批判錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)和做法:As far as something is concerned, . 就某事而言,It was obvious that 很顯然, .It may be true that , but it doesn t mean that可能 是對(duì)的,但這并不意味著It is natural to believe that , but we shouldn t ignore that認(rèn)為 .是很自然的,但我們不應(yīng)忽視 .There is no evidence to suggest that 沒有證據(jù)表明過渡詞強(qiáng)調(diào)still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially, obviously, clearly.比較like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.對(duì)比by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.列舉for example, for instance, such as, take for example. Except (for), to illustrate.時(shí)間later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during,nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards,temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.順序first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.可能presumably, probably, perhaps.解釋in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.遞進(jìn)What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.讓步although, after all, in spite of , despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.轉(zhuǎn)折however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on theother hand, unfortunately. whereas原因for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.結(jié)果as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.總結(jié)on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.其他Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case圖表作文常用句型As is shown in the graph 如圖所示The graph shows that 圖表顯示As can be seen from the table, 從表格中可以看出From the chart, we know that 從這張表中,我們可知All these data clearly prove the fact that所有這些數(shù)據(jù)明顯證明這一事實(shí),即The increase of . in the city has reached to 20%.這個(gè)城市的 .增長已達(dá)到20%.In 1985, the number remained the same.1985年,這個(gè)數(shù)字保持不變.There was a gradual decline in 1989.1989年,出現(xiàn)了逐漸下降的情況.