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發(fā)布時間：2017-06-05 20:43:59回顧歷年12月四級作文名師改卷感悟及針對建議1.大家拿到作文題目之后，先要仔細閱讀題目明確作文的類型。這一點是非常關(guān)鍵的因為四級相對很強調(diào)作文的結(jié)構(gòu)。如果沒有一個很清楚的結(jié)構(gòu)，一定會失去一定的分數(shù)。四級作文一般有下面三種結(jié)構(gòu)：說明文，議論文和應(yīng)用文寫作。說明文主要可以分為闡述主題類型的，利弊類型的，原因結(jié)果類型的，解決問題類型的以及諺語說明類型。議論文主要是就觀點進行反駁類型的。應(yīng)用文寫作主要包括演講詞，求職求學信，邀請信，感謝信和投訴信等。所以大家必須在平時復(fù)習的過程明確各種類型的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，這樣在考試時候就可以在結(jié)構(gòu)上不會出現(xiàn)任何問題，也不會因為寫跑題而失分。 來源：www.yeeyi.net5.卷面一定要整潔，字一定要寫的漂亮，這可以在很大程度上影響你們分數(shù)的升降。印象分數(shù)幾乎全部是這個決定的，所以大家也要主要平時handwriting的練習。四六級作文評分標準及錯誤總結(jié)評分標準2分 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5分 基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。8分 基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。11分 切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分 切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好。基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。(注:白卷,作文與題目毫不相關(guān),或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想,則給0分。)常見寫作錯誤一、主語錯誤1.主語缺失1)Inourcountryfeelsveryfree.Peoplefeelfreeinourcountry.2)Inmyhometownaren tverybusy.Peopleinmyhometownareverybusy.2.非名詞主語1)Richdoesn tensureahappylife.Beingrichdoesn tmeanahappylife./Wealthdoesn tensureahappylife.2)Keeptwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.Keepingtwofull-timejobsissimplyimpossible.3.主謂錯位1)Readingbookscanacquireknowledge.Peoplecanacquireknowledgefrombooks.2)Nowpeople slivescan tleaveTV.Nowpeoplecan tdowithoutTV.二、謂語錯誤1.多重謂語1)Inourmodernsociety,therearemanyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated.Inourmodernsociety,manyexamplesaroundusshowthatmanypeoplearecheated./Alargenumberofpeoplehavefallenvictimtovarioustricks.2)Povertymakesmanypeoplecan tstudyabroad.Povertymakesmanypeopleunabletostudyabroad./Povertymakesitimpossibleformanypeopletostudyabroad./Povertypreventsmanypeoplefromstudyingabroad./Manypeoplecan tstudyabroadbecauseofpoverty.2.非動詞謂語1)Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersagainstit.Somepeoplefirmlyagree,butothersareagainstit.2)Itissaidthattheplaceworthstouring.Itissaidthattheplaceisworthtouring.3.主謂不一致1)IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachmeCollegeEnglish.IhavetovisittheteacherwhoteachesmeCollegeEnglish.2)Iuseadiskbecauseitholdplentyofdata.Iuseadiskbecauseitholdsplentyofdata..4.誤用詞組1)Theyinsistonpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.Theyinsistthatpost-graduatestudyisveryimportantforthem.2)Iamafraidofthatit sgoingtorain.Iamafraidthatit sgoingtorain.三、冠詞錯誤1)Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.Inmyopinion,thefutureofthebicycleisverypromising.2)Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlythegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadones.Theysuggestthatweshouldchooseonlygoodbookstoreadandnevertouchbadones.四、代詞錯誤1.偷梁換柱1)Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,youshouldnotplagiarize.Animportantthingforthestudenttorememberisthatwhenwritingapaper,heshouldnotplagiarize.2)Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.Ifwecheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveusandtheywillleaveusalong./Ifyoucheatothers,friendswillneverbelieveyouandtheywillleaveyoualone.2.指代不明1)Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,whichnobodybelieved.Hegaveareason,whichnobodybelieved,fornotattendingthemeeting./Hegaveareasonfornotattendingthemeeting,areasonwhichnobodybelieved.2)Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdentheyhavetobear.Sometimesteachershavetoinformthestudentsoftheheavyburdenstudentshavetobear.五、形容詞、副詞錯誤1)Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferently.Whatismore,thechangeoftheweatherwillmaketheplacelookdifferent.2)Surprisingenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.Surprisinglyenough,hefacesthefailureverybravely.六、分詞誤用1)Comparingwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.Comparedwithothercountries,Chinapayslittleattentiontotheenergyproblem.2)Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewingthroughmycamera.Thosespiritswerejustlikeanindispensablepartofthewholepicturewhenviewedthroughmycamera.七、修飾語誤置1)SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforlearningEnglishpeople.SpokenEnglishisanimportantpartforpeoplelearningEnglish.2)Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.Tokeeptheairclean,wemustmovetothecountrysidethefactorieswhichgiveoffpoisonousgasestothecountryside.八、垂懸修飾語1)Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,peoplehavegreatlyimprovedtheirlivingstandard.2)Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,theletterwaspostedatonce.Totellmyfriendthegoodnews,Ipostedtheletteratonce.九、平行錯誤1)Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,wecanincreasethespeedoftraffic.2)BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyofthecourseandhowlongitlasted.BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmeofthedifficultyandlengthofthecourse./BeforeIselectedthenewcourse,myteacherwarnedmehowdifficultthecoursewasandhowlongitlasted.十、搭配錯誤1)Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassoexpensivethatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.Inthepastthepriceofmeatwassohighthatmostfamiliescouldnotaffordit.2)Crowdedtrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.Heavytrafficinsomelargecitiesisabigproblemforcitydwellers.十一、破句1)Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob.Thenyoumustpassthejobinterview.Nowadays,ifyouwanttofindajob,youmustpassthejobinterview.2)Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners.Becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.Firstyoushouldshowgoodmanners,becausethefirstimpressionyouleaveonothersisimportant.英語四六級寫作經(jīng)典句型1)主語從句It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known thatIt is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent thatIt goes without saying that It is universally acknowledged thatIt is / thatwww.yeeyi.NET2)賓(表)語從句We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定語從句(限定性和非限定性)As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table ,There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)狀語從句(時間，原因，地點，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等)When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster (怪物) which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分詞短語做定語或狀語Prof. Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒裝句Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem. Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被動句Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem. He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds. Many people believe that (It is believed that8)設(shè)問句Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?9)比較1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.6.Like anything else, it has its faults.7.A and B has several points in common.8.A bears some resemblances to B.9.However, the same is not applicable to B.10. A and B differ in several ways.11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.13. The same is true of B.14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ...10)原因壹壹英語(www.YeeYi.Net)1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that...6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are...7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...8. One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ...9. Another contributing factor (cause ) is ...10. Perhaps the primary factor is that ...11. But the fundamental cause is that ...11)結(jié)果1. It may give rise to a host of problems.2. The immediate result it produces is ...3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...4. Its consequence can be so great that...12)批駁1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact.3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water.4) Many of us have been under the illusion that...5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.6) It makes no sense to argue for ...7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ...9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ...13)舉例1) A good case in point is ...2) As an illustration, we may take ...3) Such examples might be given easily.4) ...is often cited as an example.14)證明1) No one can deny the fact that ...2) The idea is hardly supported by facts.3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ...4) Recent studies indicate that ...5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ...6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ...15)開篇1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ...2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ...5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ...6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ...8) According to a recent survey, ...9) With the rapid development of ..., ...16)結(jié)尾1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ...2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ...4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ...5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help.6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ...7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly.9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ...10) Taking all these into account, we ...11) Whether it is goodornot /positiveornegative, one thing is certain/clear...2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(一)一Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicLongHolidays.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.長假給大學生帶來的好處2.長假可能給大學生帶來的問題3.我應(yīng)當怎樣利用好長假LongHolidaysGenerallyspeaking,longholidaysaregoodforuscollegestudents.Ontheonehand,wehavealotoftimetostudybyourselvesandthusimproveweaknessesandfurtherdevelopstrengths.Ontheotherhand,wecantakepart-timejobs,whichcanmakeusrealizeresponsibilityandmakeourselvesbetterpreparedforsociallife.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Somestudentsfailtomakegooduseoftheirtimeandtheyareaddictedtovariouscomputergames.Iamafraidthattheyarelikelytoruinthemselvesinthisway.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwilltrytomakethebestuseofmyprecioustime.IwillspendmostofmyholidaysstudyingEnglishforthatIamverypooratit.Inaddition,Iwilltakeapart-timejobasprivateteacher.Bythismeans,Icanearnsomemoneyandputmyknowledgeintopracticeaswell.二Directions:Forthispart，youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnaHarmoniousDormitoryLife.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.宿舍生活有時會出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況2.一個和諧宿舍生活的必要性3.如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活OnaHarmoniousDormitoryLifeDormitorylifeisanindispensablepartofcollegelife.Butsometimestheharmonyinthedormitorywillbedisturbedinonewayoranother.Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttocollegestudentsandbenefitsallthemembers.Ontheonehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheotherhand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.Thereareseveralwaystocreateandmaintainaharmoniousdormitorylife.Firstly,youhavetoevaluateyourlifestyleandtrytogetridofyourdirtyhabits,ifthereareany.Secondly,whenanannoyingsituationarises,you lljusthavetolearntotolerateeachotherandco-exist.Thirdly,you llhavetosharewitheachotherandmakegoodfriends.Inconclusion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforthesakeofgoodstudyandgoodlife.三Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSilenceIsNotAlwaysGold.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.在現(xiàn)代社會中， 沉默是金 不一定是好事2.請舉例說明3.總結(jié)全文SilenceIsNotAlwaysGoldSilenceisgold isapopularsayinginwhichmanypeoplehavebelief.Tothesepeoplespeakingtoomuchisnotamerit.However,ifyoualwayskeepsilent,youwillprobablymissmanygoldenopportunitiesinsteadofobtainingthegoldofsilence.LastweekIreadanarticlewrittenbyanofficelady.Thecompanywheresheworkedhadtwokindsofoffices:cubicleofficeandwindowoffice.Asanewemployeesheworkedinacubicleofficetogetherwithtwentycolleagues.Twoyearslatershestillworkedtherebutsomecolleagueswhocamelaterthanherhadmovedintothewindowoffice.Shefeltconfused.Onedayonecolleaguetoldherthatwindowofficewasn tobtainedwithoutrequest.Butbelievingthatshecertainlygainedoneifshedidagoodjobthewomanhadneveraskedforit.Fromthewoman sexperiencewelearnthatsilenceisnotalwaysgold.Inthemodernsocietyoneneedstospeakhismindandspeakforhisowninterests.四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTryingtoRenewKnowledge.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese：1.更新知識的重要性2.怎樣更新知識3.你自己的感受TryingtoRenewKnowledgeToday ssocietyisofknowledgeeconomyage,inwhichnewknowledgeemergesmuchfasterthaneverbefore.Moreover,knowledgeplaysanimportantpartinthewholeeconomy.Therefore,everyonefindsitnecessarytorenewhis(orher)knowledge,otherwisehe(orher)willbeleftbehindthesociety.Therearesomewaystoupdateknowledge.Ontheonehand,onecanattenddifferentcoursesatalltypesofschools,eitherpart-timeorfull-time.Ontheotherhand,self-studyis,inasense,amoreconvenientandpracticalmethodbywhichonecaneffectivelyrenewhis(orher)knowledge.Inmyview,Ihaveprimarilydependedonself-taughtmethodintherecentyears.AlthoughIambusydoingdailywork,Istillinsistonteachingmyselfatnight.Inthisway,Icannotonlykeepupwiththeswiftdevelopmentofsocietybutalsoapplynewknowledgetomypracticalwork,whichbenefitsmealot.五Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWesternFastFood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.洋快餐頗受中國消費者的青睞2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因3.我的看法WesternFastFoodFastfoodisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina,especiallyamongchildrenandteenagers.Today,nothingismorerepresentativeofthefastpaceofmodernsocietythanfastfood.Thereareseveralreasonsforitspopularity.Foronething,itisfastandconvenient.Gointoafastfoodrestaurant,andyourfoodwillbereadyinaminute.Precioustimewon tbewastedinwaiting-in-linetoorderorwaitingatyourtableforyourfoodtoarrive.Foranother,itspopularityisalsoattributedtothecleanfood,theexcellentserviceandthecomfortableenvironmentofthefastfoodrestaurants,andAmericanstyle.However,Ithinkthatfastfoodisn thealthyenoughbecauseitdoesn tcomposeabalanceddietandislowinnutrition.Fastfoodisonlyagoodchoicewhenyouareinahurryandweshouldturntoitonlyonceinawhile.六、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSocialPractice.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.大學生越來越重視參與社會實踐2.社會實踐對大學生學習和生活的影響3.如何正確看待社會實踐 我要收藏SocialPracticeSocialpracticeisabridgebetweentheirtheoryandreality.So,inrecentyears,moreandmorecollegestudentschoosetotakepart-timejobsinoroutsideschool.Inthesocialpractice,studentsaresuretolearnmorethantheirtextbooks.Theirparticipationinsocialpracticemightstrengthentheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.Theirclosecontactwiththeworkingpeoplemighthelpthemtoapplytheirknowledgetothesolutiontothepracticalproblem.Butmanyteacherscomplainthattherearefewerandfewerstudentswhopayattentiontotheirstudy.Inmyview,it sanundeniedfactthatstudentsbreakthebalancebetweentheirjobsandstudies,especiallywhentheyfallintoconflict.ButIthinkstudentsshouldspendtheirsparetimetakingpart-timejobs.Timelyparticipationinsocialpracticewillbenefitthemallthroughtheirlife.七、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.心理健康問題往往是導致疾病的原因2.分析人們產(chǎn)生心理健康問題的原因(可從失業(yè)、壓力過重、缺少支持、缺乏人際交往能力等方面加以分析)3.你認為人們應(yīng)如何保持心理健康HowtoKeepPsychologicallyHealthy?Oneinfourpeoplewillexperiencesomekindofmentalhealthprobleminthecourseofayear.Whenyoufailtomanagetheseproblems,theyarelikelytocausevariousmentalillnesses.Thecausesofmentalhealthproblemsoftenvaryalotfromonecasetoanother.Intoday ssociety,agoodnumberofpeoplearesufferingfromheavypressure.Otherslackcommunicationskills.Inaddition,alotofpeopleareignorantofpsychologicalknowledgeabouthowtokeepmentallyfit.Therearealotofwaystocurbmentalhealthproblemsandkeeppsychologicallyhealthy.Firstly,findtherealcauseofyourmentalhealthproblemandseewhetheryoucandosomethingtomakeachange.Secondly,learntorelaxyourselfandtakeexercisetoreleasethepressure.Lastly,youmayfindithelpfultotalktoyourpartnerorfriendaboutyourproblem,orseeksupportandadvicefromapsychologicalconsultant.八、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAidEducationinChina.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:AidEducationinChina1.支教的現(xiàn)象2.支教的意義3.你的觀點AidEducationinChinaTherehasbeenahottopicrecentlyaboutcollegestudents beingencouragedtohelpchildreninthepoorandremoteareas.Generallyaid-educationishelpfulintwoaspects.Firstofall,itcanbroadenvolunteers horizonsinpoverty-strickenregions.Forinstance,itisagoldenopportunityforvolunteerstoexperienceacompletelydifferentlife.Inaddition,collegestudentshavetoadaptthemselvestotheharshlivingconditions,meanwhiletheycanmakefriendswiththechildren.Inmyview,thefutureofChina seducationdependsonthejointeffortsofthesociety,thegovernmentandallthecitizens.Tosumup,wecollegestudentsshouldtaketheinitiativeinresponsetotheappealforsupplyinghelptochildreninpoorregions.九、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicSelectingCourses.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.選修課程在大學很普遍2.解釋其中的原因3.你的看法SelectingCoursesRecently,peopleingrowingnumbersshowtheirconcernaboutselectingcourses.Insomecolleges,studentsarepermittedtopickouttheircourse sprofessorsfreely.Thereasonsarelistedasfollows:Inthefirstplace,studentscanchoosetheteacheraccordingtotheirinterests,whichwillbehelpfulfortheirfuturecareers.Besides,selectingcoursescanreducetherateofstudents absenceindirectlyforstudentsusuallychoosetheirfavoriteteachers.AsfarasIamconcerned,everycoinhastwosides.Ontheonehand,studentsmaylearnthecoursebetter,becausetheymaychoosetheprofessortheyliked.Ontheotherhand,iftheprofessorwhoisverypopularandagreatnumberofstudentswouldliketoattendhis/hercourse,theclassroommustbeovercrowded.Itwillhaveabadimpactontheclass.十、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:假設(shè)你是Tony，是英語一班二年級學生，因有事不能上外教Ms.Riddle的課，給她寫一張請假條，說明你不能來上課的原因。October8,2007DearMs.Riddle,IwouldliketoknowifIcouldaskforacasualleaveofabsencefromyourOralEnglishclassthisThursdaymorning.YesterdayafternoonIgotaphonecallfrommycousin,whoisnowoperatingasmallcompanyinsuburbsofthiscity.Heneedsaninterpreterfortwodaysbutcannotfindthemosttrustworthyperson,sohewantsmetomakeanattempt.ItseemstomethatthisisagoldenopportunitytoputwhatIhavelearnedinyourclassintopractice,butIneedyourpermissionofabsence.IfyouthinkImaygoandhelphimovercomethedifficulty,IamconfidentthatI lldoagoodjobandbothofuswillbethankful.Earnestlyyours,Tony2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(三)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIntelligence-NatureorNurture?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人認為智力是天生的我要收藏2.也有人認為智力是環(huán)境決定的3.如何更好地發(fā)展智力Intelligence-NatureorNurture?Nowadays,thereisnoagreementamongpeopleconcerningintelligence.Somepeoplecontendthatintelligenceistosomeextentsomethingwearebornwith.Andthecloserthebloodrelationshipbetweentwopeople,theclosertheyarelikelytobeinintelligence.However,othersmaintainthatenvironmentplaysacrucialroleinourintelligence.Forinstance,ifweputtwoidenticaltwinsindifferentenvironments,wemightsendonetouniversityandtheothertoafactorywherethejobisboring,wewouldfinddifferencesintheirintelligenceseveralyearslater.Justaseverycoinhastwosides,ourintelligenceispartlybornandpartlydeveloped.Thesurewaytodevelopourintelligenceisintelligentparentsaswellasagoodenvironment.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicParentsAretheBestTeachers.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.父母是最好的老師2.解釋其中的原因3.重申觀點ParentsAretheBestTeachersItisyourparentswhoteachyoutowalk;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutospeak;itisyourparentswhoteachyoutodothesebasicthingsinyourlife.Thusparentsshouldbethebestteachers!Firstofall,parentsknowusmorethanothersdo.Parentsgiveuslife,andIconsiderthatwewillspendplentyoftimewiththem.Therefore,theylearnaboutourmeritandshortcomingsclearly.Atthesametime,theywillhelpustoshakeoffourdemerit.Besides,parentsownmuchmorelifeexperiencethanus.Sometimes,theyarejustlikeourmodels.Andasthesayinggoes: Exampleisbetterthanprecept. Thuswewillunconsciouslyimitatesomeofourparents habitsandstylesofbehavior,whichmeansthatwecanlearngoodthingsfromthem.Justasthesayinggoes: Thereisnoplacelikehome. AndIthinkthereisnoteacherlikeourparents.Theyarethebestteachersinourlife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAShoppingCenterintheNeighborhood.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:據(jù)稱，在你所在社區(qū)內(nèi)將建一個大型購物中心。你同意還是反對這個計劃?為什么?請說出具體的理由。AShoppingCenterintheNeighborhoodAlthoughlargeshoppingcentersareveryconvenientandgoodplacestospendfreetime,theycanalsobringsomedisadvantages,andforthisreasonIwoulddisagreewiththebuildingofoneinmyneighborhood.Firstofall,onedisadvantageofhavingalargeshoppingcenterwouldbeagreatincreaseintraffic.Morecarswouldnotonlybringtrafficjamsbutalsonoiseandparkingproblems.Second,alargeshoppingcenterrequiresalotofspace.Tobuildone,someopenspacewouldhavetobesacrificed.Wemightnolongerhaveroomforasportsground.Justbecauseoftheabovedisadvantages,Iwouldopposeanyplantoconstructalargeshoppingcenterinmyneighborhood.Althoughitisnecessaryformetovisitshoppingcentersonoccasion,Icouldspendsometimetravelingtoanotheronenotfaraway.MyneighborhoodisapeacefulandquietplaceandIhopeitwillstaythatway.2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(三)四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:對大學生的時間安排有兩種不同的看法：有人認為大學生就該整天讀書;有人認為參加體育鍛煉是大學生生活的一部分?你的看法?總結(jié)全文HowtoArrangeYourTimeatCollege?Nowadays,peoplearedividedonthequestionhowstudentsshouldarrangetheirschooldays.Somepeopleclaimstudentsshouldspendthewholeschooldaysinacademicstudies.However,otherscontendphysicalexerciseshouldbearequiredpartofeveryschoolday.Asforme,Iwillchoosethelatterwithouthesitation.Beingastudent,hisorhermaintaskistoworkhardonhisorheracademicstudy.Onlybystudyinghardcanheorsheobtainadequateknowledgefromacademicstudies.Nevertheless,Idon tthinkastudentshouldfocusonstudyingtoomuch,heorsheshouldjoininothermeaningfulactivities.Forinstance,doingphysicalexerciseisagoodwaytomakestudents lifemorecolorfulandbeneficial.Inaword,whenstudentsgainknowledgefromacademicstudies,theyshouldnotneglecttorelaxthemselvesandtakeregularphysicalexercise.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicDoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有些人認為信息時代不再需要傳統(tǒng)圖書館了，因為2.有些人認為信息時代傳統(tǒng)圖書館仍然有重要作用，因為3.你的看法DoLibrariesBecomeUselessattheAgeofInformation?Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutlibrariesattheageofinformationamongpeople.Somepeople,especiallytheyoungergeneration,challengethevalueofconventionallibraries.Whentheyneedanyinformationintheirstudiesorwork,theycanturntotheircomputersforhelp.Forthisreason,theydonotneedtogotoalibraryforborrowingorreturningoneortwobooks.Whileothers,includingmostoldpeopleaswellasscholars,valuelibraries.Theylovelibrariesbecausetheycanenjoypeaceandquietnessinanisolatedspiritualworld.Andtheyalsohaveaccesstorareacademicworksneededfortheirstudiesinthelibraries.Inmyview,conventionallibrariesarestillavailablethoughthereisstillmuchroomforimproving.AttheAgeofInformation,aslongasknowledgeisrespectedandcherished,librarieswon textinctfromourlives.Ontheotherhand,librariesshouldnotrefusethelatestinformationtechnology,whichwillenablethemtoregainthoseyoungreaders.2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(四)一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上圖所示的手機用戶變化情況(據(jù)統(tǒng)計，2007年上半年手機用戶量超過5億)2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.對此現(xiàn)象做出評價CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.一、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledCellPhones.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbasedonthefollowinggraghandtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.描述上圖所示的手機用戶變化情況(據(jù)統(tǒng)計，2007年上半年手機用戶量超過5億)2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因3.對此現(xiàn)象做出評價CellPhonesAsisshowninthechart,cellphonesarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithinChina.In1999,thenumberofcellphonesinusewasonly24,480,000,butin2002,thenumberismorethan100million,whichisaturningpoint.Theneweststatisticshowsthatin2007thenumberhasexceeded500million.Therearemanyfactorscontributingtothisdevelopment.Firstly,acellphonehasnowiresandcanbecarriedeverywhereeasily.Secondly,acellphoneissomethingwonderfulthatwecanhavefunwithnews,games,musicandchatthroughsendingshortmessages.Thirdly,thedropinpriceandthesimultaneousimprovementinthefunctionshavemadeitpossibleforanaveragepersontomakeuseofacellphone.?Thewideuseofcellphoneshasmadethemmoreandmoreindispensableinpeople sdailylife.Themanyfunctionsofthecellphonehavemadecertainpeoplereluctanttoseparatethemselvesfromtheircellphone.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoDealwithSub-health?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.隨著現(xiàn)代化的不斷加速發(fā)展，全世界的物質(zhì)生活水平不斷攀升，但人們卻日益受到 亞健康 這種不良狀態(tài)的威脅2.亞健康的具體表現(xiàn)及在我國的蔓延程度(據(jù)調(diào)查，北京75%、上海72%、廣州70%的上班族都處于亞健康狀態(tài))3.在現(xiàn)代社會中應(yīng)怎樣解決亞健康問題HowtoDealwithSub-healthWiththemodernizationoftheworld,people sstandardoflivinghasimprovedalot.Thenthereappearsastateofsub-healthamongpeoplewhichposesanewthreattothem.Therearesometypicalsymptomsforpeoplewhoareinastateofsub-health.Firstofall,thosewhosufferfromitoftenhaveaheadacheorbackache.Secondly,theyfeellikehavingarestfrequently.Whatupsetsusmostisthat,thesituationisspreadingcountrywide.Asaresult,moreandmoreworkersinbigcitiesareharassedbyit,withapercentageof75inBeijing,72inShanghaiand70inGuangzhourespectively.Thenhowcanwesolvethisproblemeffectively?Expertssuggestthatthebestwaytokeepourselveshealthyistodoexercises.Itisalsoveryimportantthatpeopleshouldformagoodlivinghabit,forexample,gettingupearlyandgoingtosleepearly.Onlydoingsocanwekeepushealthy.四、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicAJob-searchingExperience.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.介紹得到這次求職信息的途徑2.敘述這次求職經(jīng)歷的全過程3.談?wù)勀銓@次經(jīng)歷的感受或體會AJob-searchingExperienceLastFridaymyEnglishteachertoldmethatoneofherfriendswaslookingforanEnglishgoverness.Iaskedforherfriend snameandphonenumber.Ideterminedtoseizethechanceandhavemyfirstjob.IwasalittlenervouswhenIwenttothewoman shouse.IwastoldthatthetalkbetweenusthatdaywoulddecidewhetherIcouldtakethejob.However,whenthewoman,Lucyasshewascalled,welcomedmeintoherhouse,Ifeltmuchrelaxed.IthoughtaslongasIwassincereandfriendlyIwouldperformwell.Theconversationwentonsmoothly.SheseemedmuchmoreinterestedinmyhabitsandhobbiesthanhowgoodIwasatEnglish.Ithappenedthatwehavethesamehobby:playingtennis.Itoldheraboutmyfamilyandschoollife.ObviouslyIsucceededandfromthenonIwenttoteachherEnglisheveryweekend.Lucytoldmelaterthatitwasmysinceritythatmadeherwillinglyacceptme.Itistruethatwecanplaysometrickswhileseekingforajob,butremembertobesincere.It sthesecretofmysuccess.五、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionentitledMyOpiniononCampusLove.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.有人認為校園戀愛的影響不好2.有人卻認為校園戀愛沒有什么不好3.你的觀點MyOpiniononCampusLoveOncampus,loverscanbefoundhereandthere.Somepeoplethinktoomuchintimacyhasabadinfluence.Ittakesloverstoomuchtimeandenergy.Furthermore,theirintimacycandistracttheirownaswellasotherstudents attentionfromstudy.Campusshouldbeaplaceforstudyandshouldmaintainanatmosphereoflearning.Ontheotherhand,otherpeoplebelieveitisOK.Pursuingloveisallrighttostudentsoncampusandintimacyisanaturalexpressionoflove.Somescholarsoflawholdthatfriendshipandappropriateintimacyareanimportantpartofstudentdevelopment.Inmyopinion,whatallpeopleshoulddoisjustleaveitasitis.Universitystudentsareadults,andtheycanhandletheirownaffairswellenough.However,theyhavetoadmitthatschoolisaplacewherepeoplereceiveaneducationandtheirmaintaskistostudy.Therefore,studentsareexpectedtobehavethemselvesinproperways.2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(五)一、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopicDoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1. 永不言棄 一直被認為是一種積極的生活態(tài)度，是個人成功的關(guān)鍵因素2.但是，也有人認為適當?shù)姆艞壊攀敲髦堑倪x擇3.你對此的看法及理由DoWeNeed Nevergiveup ?Itiswidelyacceptedthat Nevergiveup ,astrongandpositivelifeattitude,isthekeyforindividualsuccessonthegroundsthatpermanentpersistencemayboostourconfidence,strengthenourwill,andprovideusasecondchanceforsuccesswhenweareinhardship.However,othersarguethatsensibleabandonmentismorepreciousthanblindpersistencebecausethewiseoneshouldchoosethemostsuitableareaforhimself/herself.Inmyopinion,weneedtolearntogiveuptimely.Themostimmediatereasonisthatweshouldadjustouraimcarefullyinordertogoaheadcontinuously.Sometimes,togiveupthoseunrealistictargetsisessentialforsuccess.Besides,theattitude Nevergiveup exhaustsusbothmentallyandphysically.Onlythroughlearningtogiveupcanweleadapleasantandrelaxinglife.Finally,thetemporarycomprisemeansanewstart,abeginningbringingnewhopes,expectationsandopportunitiesforus.Passiveasgivingupsoundsalike,itrepresentsamorematureandrealisticmentality.Ifthoseopposingthisattitudecantakeintoconsiderationofitsbenefits,thenthismayseemacceptableinourlives.二、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.住房問題在大城市變得越來越嚴峻2.住房問題產(chǎn)生原因及給城市帶來的影響3.建議一個解決辦法(如：多造高層建筑;向地下發(fā)展;建造衛(wèi)星城市;疏散城市人口等)HowtoSolvetheHousingProbleminBigCities?Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareflowingintobigcities.Accordingly,thehousingprobleminbigcitiesisbecomingmuchmoreserious.Peopleinthebigcityarecomplaininghousingshortageandroaringpriceofthehousing.Asweknow,thetemptationandopportunitiesprovidedbybigcitiesattractpeoplewhowanttomakeafortuneinbigcities,whichisthemajorcauseofhousingprobleminbigcities.Besides,housevacancyandspeculatinginthehousingmarketarebecomingthetoughproblem.Wecan tdenythehousingproblemhasbroughtaboutgreatpressuretothelow-incomefamilies.Meanwhile,solvingthisproblemwillaffectthepublic sconfidenceonthegovernment.Tosolvethisproblem,Ithinkbuildingsatellitecitiesinthesuburbsismorepractical.Thefreshairandbeautifulsceneryinthesuburbswillpullmanypeoplefromtheovercrowdedcityandalleviatethepressureofhousing.三、Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:目前假文憑現(xiàn)象屢見不鮮這種現(xiàn)象造成的危害我們應(yīng)該怎么做HowtoEliminateFakeDiplomas?Therehasbeenaseriousepidemicoffakediplomasinsomebigcitiesrecently.UsuallyacertificateofBachelor sDegreecostsabout200yuan,whichisreallycheapcomparedwiththe4yearsofhardworkandtheprettybigsumoffeesinvolvedinnormalwaysofgettingthediploma.Thevictimsoffakediplomasarefirstofallemployers,whopayhighsalariesbutdonotgetrealtalents.Peoplewhohavegenuinediplomasarealsohurtgreatly.Theyhavehonestlyspent4orevenmoreyearsandgreatenergyworkinghardinschools,butcannotgetanyadvantageinjobhunting.Tocombattheepidemic,practicalabilityandindividualpersonalityshouldberecognizedasimportantfactorsofexcellentjobperformance.Besides,effectivemeasuressupportedbyadvancedITtechnologyshouldbeintroducedandtakentohelpemployersdistinguishgenuinediplomasfromfakeones.四、談?wù)勀銓x秀節(jié)目的看法OnTVShow時下電視選秀節(jié)目非常流行有人認為選秀很好，能給普通人展示自己的機會我的觀點OnTVShowTVhasbeenonemediumofcommunicationthathasconnectedmillions.Anditisthislinkthatmakestalenthuntshowsonthetubeamazinglyinfluential.Youngfacesconveyingdisappointmentorevenoverwhelmingjoyhavebecomeacommonsightonasmanychannelsasyourremoteallowsyoutosurf.SomepeoplehavetheiropinionsontheTVshows.Theadvantagesoftheshowsarecleartosomepeople.Foronething,intermsofbusiness,theincreasingpopularityoftalentshowshashelpedthechannelsingeneratinghugeincomebywayofadvertisingandpromotions.Foranotherthing,theTVshowscanmakethecommonpeoplehaveopportunitytoshowthemselves.Personally,Isidewiththeformeropinion.Itisawonderfulfeelingandagreatwaytorelaxformetowatchtalentshowsandseeordinarypeoplelikemyselfbecomefamousandwincashprizes.Aslongastalentshowsareentertainingandinspiringus,thereisgreatsenseinkeepingandencouragingthem.五、ALetterofAdvice假設(shè)你是一名大四學生，即將畢業(yè)離校，請你根據(jù)四年的大學生活的經(jīng)歷給大一新生寫一封忠告信：1.作簡單介紹2.大一新生如何適應(yīng)大學生活3.強調(diào)學習英語的重要性ALetterofAdviceDearFreshmen,I,theundersigned,amaseniorintheComputerScienceDepartmentofPekingUniversity.Iwouldliketosayafewwordstoyou,whichIhopewouldbehelpfultoyou.Tobeginwith,thechangeofideasisofmostimportanceforfreshmentoadaptthemselvestocampuslife.Duringthemiddleschooldays,weusuallydependuponourteachersatschoolandparentsathome.However,thelifeandstudyonuniversitycampusfeaturesindependence,whichisessentialtoourpsychologicaldevelopment.Inmyview,wehadbetteralwaysbearinmindtheideaofindependence.What smore,Englishlearningisamust.Ononehand,withoutCET4certificate,wecannotgetourdegreewhenwegraduatefromuniversity.Ontheotherhand,whenwehuntforjob,Englishlevelisadecidingfactor.Therefore,IdohopethatallofyouwillhaveagoodunderstandingofthenecessityoflearningEnglishwell.GoodLucktoyou!SincerelyYoursLiMing2009年6月英語四六級考試考前必看范文(六)一、InternetHarmony1.隨著社會和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)成為了每個人必不可少的獲取信息的工具2.但是，在網(wǎng)絡(luò)上也出現(xiàn)了一些不和諧的因素，如垃圾信息，黃色網(wǎng)站，虛假新聞，網(wǎng)絡(luò)炒作等 壹壹英語考試www.yeeYi.net3.如何采取措施制止和消除這些現(xiàn)象InternetHarmonyTheadventoftheInternetusheredinaneweraofinterpersonalcommunicationsandbusinessoperations.Undoubtedly,theNetarerevolutionizingthedailylivesofthepeoplewhohaveanaccesstoit.TheprimaryreasonbehindtheInternetboomrootsinitsmultifunction.ArangeofproblemslurkingbehindthefrenzyofInternetimpressivelystandout.AvastmajorityofInternetusers mailboxesaresaturatedwithjunkmails,anissuewhichsparksstrongcriticismandgeneratesthelossofcorporateproductivity.Pornwebsiteslureagrowingnumberofyoungpeople svisits.Falsenewsviathee-mail,BBSandchatroomincreasinglyposesathreattothesocialprosperityandstability.Tocrackdownthem,weshouldpushforamoreeffectivelytoughlaw.Weshouldjoinourforcestolaunchanation-widecampaign,includingimposingstiffpenaltiesonspammers,shuttingdownorblockingthelewdsitesandintroducingareal-nameregistrationsystemtocurbfraudulentmessages.Wecanfullybelievethatourcombinedeffortswillreaprewards.Acleancyberspacewillpaintourlivesmorecolorfully.二、Livingon-campusoroff-campus?1.分別闡述住校的好處和在外租房的好處2.你對在校住和在外租房的看法Livingon-campusoroff-campus?Livingon-campusmakesiteasiertogetorientedtothewaythingsaredone.Plus,youinteractmorewithotherstudents.Keepingupwithstudiesinyourfirstyearishardenough.Youshouldnothavetoworryaboutfindingyourwayaroundandfiguringouttheuniversitybureaucracy.Livinginthedormitoryalsomakeastudentfeelmoreapartoftheuniversitycommunity.Therearemoreopportunitiesforyoutoinvolveinuniversityactivitiesandnetworkingwithstudentsanduniversityadministration.Livingoff-campus,however,isadefiniteadvantageforolderstudents.Findinganapartment,dealingwithleasesandthelandlord sregulations,cookingmeals,andfiguringoutbudgetsareallgoodpracticeforlifeaftergraduation.Off-campushousingalsogivesstudentsabetterperspectiveonwhatisgoingonaroundthem.Campuscanbelikelittleworlds.Gettingtoknowneighborswhoarenotstudentsisgoodforstudentscomingfromdifferenceplaces.Ithinkitisbetterforcollegestudentstoliveoncampusduringtheirfirsttwoyears,andthenmoveintoanapartmentforoff-campuslife,whilejuniorsandseniorsneedtheindependenceofoff-campuslife.三、Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononGreenOlympics，Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothesuggestionsgivenbellowinChinese;1.現(xiàn)在社會上有很多環(huán)境污染和精神污染的現(xiàn)象，提出你對 綠色奧運 的看法。2.為什么要提倡 綠色奧運 。3.提倡綠色奧運，從自己做起。GreenOlympicsOlympicGames,asweallknow,isahistoricsportsmeeting. GreenOlympics ,isoneofthethreethemesofBeijing2008OlympicGames.Atpresent,people slifeisbeingfloodedwithexhaustgasfromautomobile,bluefilm,wastewaterandsoon.Owingtothesephenomena,weshouldadvocate GreenOlympics ,andIampositiveofthispoint.Twopossiblereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,environmentalprotectionbenefitspeople shealth.Intermsofincreasingnumberoftrashesaroundus,suchaswhiteplasticbags,one-offcupsandchopsticks,itissensibleofdisposingofthemreasonably.Soweoughttousecleantechnology,renewableandrecyclablematerials.Secondly,environmentalprotectioniscrucialtoourcountry,andeventotheworld.LotsofcountriesattachedmoreattentiontoembracetheOlympicspirits higher,faster,andstronger .Inconclusion,ascollegestudentsandtheyounggeneration,weshouldtryourbesttoadvocate GreenOlympics .The2008OlympicGameswillbeagreenanduniqueOlympics.四、Shouldgradstudentbepaidhigherthannon-grads?1.大學生目前存在錯誤心理 大學生應(yīng)比非大學生掙錢多給出大學生會有這種錯誤的心理的原因從非大學生的發(fā)展狀況來批判大學生這種錯誤的心理Shouldgradstudentsbepaidhigherthannon-grads?Inourcountry,itisobviousnowthattheuniversitygraduatesearnmoremoneythannon-graduates.Iquiteagreewiththosegraduateswhohavepaidalotfortheirstudiesandexpecttomakemoreforeitherhimselforhisfamily.However,itisnotsooptimisticallyforthosewhohopetomakeit.Thecriticalcareercompetitionmakesthemfrustratedduetomanyfactorsinvolved.Oneoftheutmostfactorsisthattheyfeelwhattheyanticipateisnotmatchingupwithwhattheyhavefoundinreality.Manyuniversitygraduatesarenotsatisfiedwithwhattheygetforwhattheyhavedone.Asamatteroffact,someofthemexpectsounrealisticthattheyimmediatelylosethecredittotheworkforcetheybelongto.Onthecontrary,someofthenon-gradswhoaremorerealisticincareerhuntingtendtogetmoresatisfiedjobcomparedwithgraduates.Thuswhatreallymattershereinsalarybalanceishowonecancontributetotheorganizationratherthanwhatbackgroundtheyhold.ThetuitionisreallyhighinChina.Manyhighqualitystudentsduetothishavelosttheiracademicpursuit.Anyresponsiblegovernmentshouldinevitablytakethisburdenandputmoremoneyinordertobringupbetternextgenerationforthenation.五、Students RatingofTheirTeachers學生給老師打分已很普遍人們對其持不同態(tài)度我的看法Students RatingofTheirTeachersNowadays,ithasbecomeascommonincollegesanduniversitiesforstudentstogradeteachersasforteacherstogradestudents.Insomeuniversitiesstudents ratinghasevenbecometheonlysourceofinformationonteachingeffectiveness.This,however,hascausedgreatcontroversy.Someareinfavoroftheratingsystem.Theyholdthatsincestudentsattendtheteachers classeseveryday,theyshouldhavetheiropinionabouttheirteachers effectiveness.Others,onthecontrary,arestronglyagainstit.Theybelievethatthereismuchmoretoteachingthanwhatisshownonstudents ratingforms.Studentsshouldnotbeexpectedtojudgewhetherthematerialsusedareuptodateorhowwelltheteacherknowsaboutthesubject.Thesejudgmentsrequireprofessionalknowledge,whichisbestleftfortheteachers colleagues.Ithinkstudents ratingoftheirteachersisnecessary,butitshouldbeconductedinawaythatcanreallyshedmeaningfullightonteachers performance.Insteadofratingtheteachers knowledgeonthesubject,studentsshouldbeaskedtoestimatewhattheythemselveshaveleanedinacourse,andtoreportonsuchthingsasateacher sabilitytocommunicatewithstudents,hisrelationshipwithstudents,andhisabilitytoarouseinterestinthesubject.
